- structural (sentence fragments and run-ons, especially comma splices)
- mechanical (spelling, capitalization, punctuation)
- tense changes
- using 2nd person (you)
- writing out of one's realm of experience
We then read a short story by Amy Tan: "Two Kinds," trying to determine whether the protagonist, June (Jing-Mei), is static/dynamic and coming up with three adjectives to describe her character.
We were interrupted somewhat today for photos.
Need the story? Find it here: Two Kinds PDF text
Next class, be prepared to work on a character sketch of June (group work),
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